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| Komenarze 62 Part 3 |
|From Samantha MSF:|
I must admit that I was really angry with Severus when he punished Harry during detention in such a cruel way. And I am VERY delighted to see that he feels some pangs of conscience, even though there are very â€¶snapish". He now canâ€™t rest until Harry forgets about that incident, and wants to do something to fasten it as soon as itâ€™s possible. Severus hates even the slightest feeling that Harry starts slipping away from him, so of course he turned so angry after getting the boyâ€™s reply. He really believes that Harry is his property, and even if the boy himself doesnâ€™t mind, anyway he has his pride. Severus was wrong and now has to pay for that. I guess he understands it as well, and that is why he is even madder at himself. He hates feeling guilty, he is not used to it, and doesnâ€™t know what to do to change it.
How emotional, how breathtaking! The scene in the bathroom is one of the greatest jealous moment I have ever read! And Severus is still mad. You described his feelings perfectly â€“ he is jealous of both aspects, physical and moral. He canâ€™t stand even imagining Harry sharing his body and his light, his devotion with someone else.
Obviously that Harryâ€™s offended behavior and his accusative words touched Severus on the raw. I ADORE this his desire to prove him that he can be spontaneous, too. So hilarious â€“ â€¶spontaneously throw him at the door", just as if he wants to say â€¶You are wrong, if you so value spontaneity, I will show you that I have it, too! I will change your mind, youâ€™ll see!" Severus is incredible! As for his further actions, his kissesâ€¦ Seems to me as some kind of apologies.
And you, dear Authors, are very cunning!) I had read that little abstract that youâ€™d posted before 62d chapter for a lot of times, but I never thought it would be THIS scene! Again you surprised me) Great work, fantastical imagination!
Oh, poor Snape( The situation is already difficult for him, and now even more, because so little time had passed since the last incident, and Harry again started slipping away. For unknown reason. How much stress he must feel every day! Especially now, when he so cares for Harry, really wants to be with him. Harryâ€™s frightened eyes are obviously torturing himâ€¦
Terrible dream, again so close to the truthâ€¦ But even despite the bitterness of the situation, Iâ€™m glad that now Severus is ready to change, just to make Harry stay. He is so addicted to that irresistible look of green eyes that cannot go on without seeing it. And I think this dream has hurt him much more than the previous one, because now his feelings towards Harry are much stronger.
Wow, itâ€™s getting more and more serious! Now Severus is absolutely intoxicated by Harryâ€™s closeness. He needs him, really needs him. Those thoughts of him, about where he can better take Harry, are just wonderful! I was giggling while reading â€“ interesting what desire can do to this cold, cruel man. I believe he was very impressed by Harryâ€™s decision to learn some material so to be able later to discuss it together. Maybe it was one of the reasons which pushed Severus a bit closer to the boy, made his hunger even stronger. And I remember his great disappointment when Harry comes to him with books again) Maybe he is jealous of Harry because of them, too?) Knowing Snape â€“ it is quite possible. He wants all Harryâ€™s attention to himself. Especially after that dreadful dream and the distance which appeared between them.
YES! Finally this happened! Finally Severus felt real anxiety at the thought of the necessity of Harryâ€™s death. Of course he immediately tried to push it away, but once he had already done it â€“ and now it came back with much more force than before. He can try to lie to himself, he can postpone those thoughts, but itâ€™s impossible to get rid of them. Not any more.
And there is the moment when Severusâ€™ tenderness awakesâ€¦ I melt when I read this abstract. It is so touching, so incredibly softâ€¦ just wow. Snape is almost in love, although itâ€™s really difficult to determine accurately. And he admitted that he is fond of getting those sweet Harryâ€™s confessions! Finally!
Oh, very tense and interesting abstract. Snape in all his cruelty, the victim who has family. I wonderâ€¦ according to your final DI trailer, Snape will be watching/will be forced to watch how Voldemort tortures Harry. Will he be giving those senseless, desperate threats, too? As like as this man who had no control over situation, but was threatening anyway? Damn, I cannot wait to see next chapters to finally know everything!
You know, one of the Russian readers wrote that DI is unusual because EVERY chapter seems to be as precious as gold. She was absolutely right! If you once start reading, you wonâ€™t stop.
Severusâ€™ emotions are incredible. He has almost lost Harry, and where are his thoughts about the Potion and the boyâ€™s mission? No, first of all he was paralyzed with horror because it is his Harry who has almost died. His warm, tender, light Potter who can make him smile, who forces the darkness to step away at least for a while.
I love the scene when Harry is sleeping on Snapeâ€™s lap. It would be so great if they spent their whole life in this way, together!
Harryâ€™s dream is something impossible) God, I was laughing so much! And I was as amused as Severus himself. How not to love this shameless Potter?
I love it! Love this rude, violent behavior of Snape and Harryâ€™s acceptance. I donâ€™t know which scenes are hotter â€“ from Harryâ€™s POV or from Severusâ€™. I guess they all are awesome! HOW can you describe them so well?!
And for Severus everything is getting more and more complicated. Oh, Iâ€™m afraid that by fucking Harry he will certainly not achieve his goal â€“ to keep the boy from telling those sweet things. Quite the contraryâ€¦
Ahah, I cannot describe how I was laughing! Itâ€™s one of the million best moments â€“ Severus decides to learn something about Quiddich just to repay Harry. These are almost real, completed, established relationships!
And again, I was laughing so much that my neighbors must think that in this flat lives someone crazy!) But Harry is really SO amusingâ€¦ I guess only he can make Severus Snape laugh. Itâ€™s soâ€¦beautiful.
Severus is so obsessed with this kiss barrier that itâ€™s seems more and more obvious that it doesnâ€™t make any sense. He is already in love - even if he wanted, it would be impossible to go deeper in relations with Harry. Too late. He should stop torturing himself and the boy â€“ there are already enough reasons for them to suffer. But Snape is Snapeâ€¦ and anyway he followed Harry. Itâ€™s a big step, really big! He now absolutely cannot stand seeing Harry hurt. He wants to comfort him. And itâ€™sâ€¦ charming.
Severus is so worried about Harry abusing himself physically. He is right, Harry is very fragile, and he depends on Snape. He is something that should be protected and loved. And there will be a day when Severus gives all of it to him!
I can see how flattered Severus is with Harryâ€™s jealousy. Apparently he didnâ€™t expect anyone to have such possessive feelings towards him, but now there is one impossible Gryffindor)
Though Iâ€™m afraid that for Severus itâ€™s more and more painful to hear Harryâ€™s assurances. And itâ€™s obvious that he really wants Potter to stay forever with him â€“ but for now it seems to be impossible. So bitterâ€¦
Oh, that cunning, slimy Severus!) When I was first reading, I couldnâ€™t imagine that he had asked Dumbledore to make Harry stay at Hogwarts! And again Snape is fooling himself. Does he really believe that he has only to watch Potter? He wants to spend this holiday with him! Especially knowing that it should be the first and the last oneâ€¦
Iâ€™m so impressed by your description of the scene where Severus saw Harry in the corridor, and the whole world ceased to exist for himâ€¦ Itâ€™s incredible. Fantastic. Great. This love isâ€¦ irresistible.
Oh, there is so much in this abstract!
First of all I want to say something before I forget it) You mentioned that there can be a traitor among Harryâ€™s friend. I have two variants â€“ either Neville or Ginny. I donâ€™t really believe itâ€™s Ginny, so my first choice is Neville. He is tooâ€¦ strange. Snape humiliates him really horribly, Harry sometimes defends him, sometimes not, and it could have angered him. Great Boy Who Lived, who is admired by everyone, even maybe by Neville himself. Good reason to envy. And then again, at the Christmas party (if I remember correctly) Neville had an interest at Anastassy, but the girl is completely in love with Harry. Harry, Harryâ€¦ He is everywhere. Soâ€¦ I guess itâ€™s Neville. But I canâ€™t be absolutely sure.
Iâ€™m in love with that jealousy scene, when Severus decided itâ€™s Harry who Tonks was kissing with!) And then the agreement between Harry and Severusâ€¦ Snape is really impressed by Harryâ€™s ability to sacrifice something so precious to him as Quiddich. His fight with himself is breathtaking. And I melt while reading how Snape was touching the stone to sense Harryâ€™s message. How he appeared to be used to those good night wishes. The fact that he went to Gryffindor Common Room is just unbelievable! Everything is so tender.
You didnâ€™t write what â€¶You have no ideaâ€¦" meant, and I know that you did it on purpose so everyone can guess their own variant) Mine is something like â€¶You have no ideaâ€¦ how weak you make me". Severusâ€™ walls are being destroyedâ€¦ and there is nothing he can do.
I have tears in my eyes. So short abstract, but so touching, so emotional. Poor, poor Severus, he is slowly killing himself. The pain is so strong. How can he live with it? Knowing that his love one should die in order to make his dream come trueâ€¦ But no, Severus is still fighting with himself. He canâ€™t admit that itâ€™s hopeless.
There are all signs of love) Severus wants to see Harry happyâ€¦ and his gift was incredible! I would love to have something like that, too.
The fact that Snape prepared Harryâ€™s favorite bearâ€¦ agreed to leave the tree... Love. Itâ€™s a real Christmas, maybe the first one for both of them. And I really, really hope that not the lastâ€¦
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